The Prompt: Today, write a story that features people disappearing.
Kissing Jake was a
bad idea.
I knew how it would
end. The same thing happened when I kissed Ben. And James. And John. And
Dashiell. And Trent. And Sarah. Let’s not forget Sarah. I really thought it
would be different with her.
Even knowing it would end badly, I couldn’t resist. Jake is
just so… yummy. And kissing is so much fun. I’ve been staring at Jake’s lips
for over a year, wondering how it would feel to touch them with mine. Wondering
if he was the one, convincing myself this time everything would work out well.
So I did it. We were face to face, close enough that I could
feel the drift of his breath against my cheek, making the tiny hairs on my face
stand on end. I breathed him in, pulling his essence deep into me and leaned
in.
My lips grazed his, all of my air escaping on a sigh. Jake
pushed closer to me, taking in my air and exchanging for it his own. One moment
of complete and perfect connection.
Then he disappeared.
I opened my eyes as the cool air replaced his warm lips on
mine. “Shit. Every time,” I said to the boy who wasn’t there.
This made seven. Seven people I have kissed into oblivion.
Not in a good way.
I plopped down on the hip-high brick wall behind me, kicking
my heels against the rough surface as punishment. I was so sure that Jake was
the one. The one I was meant to be with, the one I could kiss without him
disappearing. I needed to find the person I was meant for soon, before I decimated
the population of Ironwood.
A black mustang pulled into the parking lot, tires squealing
in protest at the sharp, quick turn into a parking space. The driver’s side
door opened, allowing Mark to unfold his long limbs and escape the tight
interior. Damn, I didn’t need this right now. I couldn’t deal with the human I
hated most after making the one I loved disappear.
His eyes landed on me, causing his lips to curl into a grin.
“Kelsie. Were you waiting for me?” he called as he began swinging his legs in
my direction.
I started to tell him “Hell, no,” but then saw the
opportunity in front of me. No one else was here. The parking lot was empty of
cars other than Mark’s. I could make him go away. Forever.
I allowed my face to relax into a welcoming, sultry smile.
“Yes, actually, I was waiting for you.”
Mark’s feet paused, a quick hitch revealing that I had
thrown him off. His face stayed smooth as silk. “Really?” His feet resumed
their rolling rhythm as he closed the distance. He didn’t stop walking until
his toes touched the brick beneath me, his legs leaning against the wall
between my own.
I settled a hand on his chest, battling the urge to push him
sharply away. I forced my fingers to curve into him, gripping the fabric of his
faded T and pulling him toward me.
I swallowed hard, hoping he thought I was swallowing excess
saliva and not the bile that was burning the back of my throat.
Mark’s eyes drifted closed as his grin became expectant. I
had him.
I pulled him in close and took a steadying breath before I
allowed my lips to meet his. His reaction was intense, his hands finding their
way to me, one twining gently into the hair at my nape, the other sliding
around my waist to nestle in the small of my back.
I felt the pull of his breath on mine and realized this was
the longest kiss I had ever had. I pushed hard on his chest, forcing Mark to
take a step away and open his eyes.
Brilliant work. Even though I could sense where the story was going once Mark arrived on the scene, you had me captivated. Your use of dialogue and evocative imagery has me looking forward to the next twenty-nine days on your blog, well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading! I have no idea what will come next...
DeleteOh, well, THIS should be interesting... ;) Poor Kelsie.
ReplyDeleteYou established a pattern that the narrator kept testing, and while I also got a feeling for what was going to happen, I didn't quite pinpoint it as well as I thought. Don't we all do something again and again, hoping for different results, and then one day, it works - and we regret it? Great story!
ReplyDeleteThat is the definition of insanity, right? Doing the same thing repeatedly and expecting a different outcome!
DeleteI love it when a twist is set up at the beginning of the story, but still catches me off-guard. Great story!
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