Day 25 of StoryADay September.
The Prompt:
Write a story that revolves
around a character with a ‘fatal flaw’ who, as a result, commits a fatal error
that has a tragic result. Use a frame story to reinforce the flaw.
Smith flipped open the front cover of the case file. It had taken all
day to convince his sergeant that he could handle this case, persuade him there
wasn’t any need to get the FBI involved. Smith had one day. One day to
interview Dr. Chase Gordon. One day to get him to confess.
The sheets in the file were in reverse chronological order. Smith
flipped quickly to the last page, wanting to think through events from start to
finish.
Kimberley Bryan, 24. Grad student at NYU. Found hanging from a ceiling
fan by her roommate. Dr. Gordon had been treating her for OCD.
Nate Green, 30. Construction worker. Jumped off the top of a forty-foot
scaffold during his lunch break. Dr. Gordon had seen him once for anger
management.
Chelsea Snow, 42. Stay at home mother of five. Found drowned in her
bathtub after swallowing a bottle of Percocet. Seeing Dr. Gordon weekly for
bipolar disorder.
Three suicides. All seeing Dr. Gordon within a week of their deaths.
Police didn’t see a connection until Mrs. Snow’s husband came in convinced
something was off. He had seen Chelsea depressed before. None of the signs were
there in the weeks before her death. He wanted records from Dr. Gordon,
transcripts of his wife’s sessions. He threatened to go get them on his own if
the police wouldn’t investigate.
Parks was the detective assigned to go talk to Dr. Gordon, see if
anything felt off. Twenty minutes after leaving Gordon’s office, Parks pulled
his car to the side of the road, put his service weapon in his mouth, and
pulled the trigger.
Gordon was brought in for questioning. Carpenter and Munoz interviewed
Dr.Gordon for two hours, all of it caught on tape. The three detectives
watching from a neighboring room saw nothing out of the ordinary. Carpenter and
Munoz left the interview, walked down to the evidence locker where they
obtained two knives. Each of the men slit his own throat.
That was yesterday.
Smith closed the file. He didn’t know how Gordon was doing it. Somehow
he was hypnotizing people, planting a command for self-destruction. Smith
wasn’t worried. He knew he would be okay. He couldn’t be hypnotized. Smith
planned to watch Gordon closely, figure out how he was doing it, and use that
information to force a confession.
Time to get started.
Smith opened the door to Interrogation Room 3. Dr. Gordon was already
inside, sitting behind the small table. His feet were shackled to each other
and the bolt in the floor. His hands were cuffed together, cinched tight to a
bar on the table, restricting his movements. Dr. Gordon looked relaxed,
unconcerned with the charges or his captivity. He smiled at Smith.
“Ah, another detective. I told the others everything I know. Which is
nothing.”
“You’re not responsible for the deaths of these people?” Smith tossed
out the handful of photos in his hand, three civilians, and three detectives.
They spread across the table.
Gordon took a moment to look them over. “I’ve met them all. Spoken with
all of them. But I did not kill any of them.”
“I know. What I want to know is how you got them to kill themselves,”
Smith settled into the chair across from Gordon, leaning his elbows on the
table.
The right side of Gordon’s mouth quirked up into a crooked smile.
“People make choices. I can’t be responsible for all of them.” Gordon paused,
his eyes traveling over the faces on the table again, coming to a stop on Nate
Green. He managed to tap the photo with the tip of his middle finger. “This man
reminded me of my son. They didn’t look anything alike; it was the energy
inside. The sense of invincibility. My son never took my advice, listened to my
warnings. Mr. Green didn’t, either. He felt he didn’t need me.”
“Is that why you made him kill himself?”
Gordon laughed. “I warned him of the fallacy of invincibility. He
ignored my warning.”
Smith changed tacks. “What happened to your son? When he didn’t
listen?”
“He fell from the sky. Much like Mr. Green. Jeff stepped out of a
plane, believing a thin piece of fabric would slow his fall.”
“Sky diving?”
Gordon nodded once.
“People do that all of the time. Usually it’s okay. Sometimes things go
wrong. Your son took a risk.”
“He thought he was invincible. That he could live forever. Many of my
patients share this delusion. If they do the right things at the right time,
all will be right in their world. It’s a myth. Shit happens, as they say.”
Gordon leaned back in his seat as far as his arms would allow, giving the light
above access to his well-buffed nails.
Smith’s eyes were drawn to the glint of light off the hard surface,
watching the gentle motion of the finger back and forth, the light tracking
across the surface of his retina. After a long moment, Smith’s eyes lifted to
Gordon’s face, watched the man pull his lip in between his teeth and bite down
gently.
“I don’t think I have anything else to say.” Gordon broke the silence.
“Perhaps we can talk again tomorrow?”
Smith blinked hard, then nodded. “Yeah, maybe tomorrow.” He gathered up
the pictures, stacking them neatly before leaving the room.
The next day, Detective Ohara opened the file for the case against Dr.
Chase Gordon. There was a fresh sheet on top, describing the death of Detective
Smith. Smith was found dead in his home, apparently having consumed a box of
rat poison.
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